poem

[AaronG]

i saw somtin on the news last night, and at about 230 i woke up from a dead sleep and just had to start writing.

i sit here with whats left of my car
trying to forget that terribel night in the ER

i had just got some new pipes
man did they sound nice
but tonight was just not the night

i went to the local spot
everyone was there, just not the cops

some kid was showing off his phat ride
with some phat ho by his side

the kid looked over and started to mouth off
i think it was somthing about his new blow off

he just kept talkin and talkin, but wouldnt shutup
so i asked if he had a couple bucks

i came here knowing racing was wrong
i knew it was dangerous all along

but that **** is the furhtest from your mind
when you get up there on the line

we both reved up and launched our cars
i wasent going to get hurt, we wernt goin far

we got up to sixty and it was still close
but when he shifted, i saw that he chocked

he missed the gear
i was in the clear
i was thinking of the victory beer

i raised my hands for the win
but all it took was that split secon'

the wheel cut sharpley and i lost control
oh **** i started to roll

over and over and over i went
but once i stopped i wasend bent

i got out and laid on the ground
but there was no one standing around

my head was still spinning but i could still see
no more that 30 yards away was my mini me

bro, brother whatever you want to say
there on the pavement is where he lay

i tried to get up but thats where i bent
my eyes went dark and i knew i was spent

now when i say that i remeber that night
it wasent me, i must have been in flight

but after those many hours under the knife
it wasent me, but my little bro who lost his life.

[98goldbird]

Damn dude..that gave me the chills. May I ask how it all turned out (sorry if it's been posted but I've been gone here and there).

[AaronG]

what do you mean all turn out? i wrote that last night after watching the news